My goodness! I got the response to my lesson in the Sexy Synopsis class. I have discovered that I have murder at the auction barn all wrong. I’m thinks of scrapping the whole thing and one of the characters. No wonder I was having trouble. If you cannot provide a good synopsis you don’t have a good book. So it is back to the drawing board for me. Charlene gets chopped, the story starts with the murder and it happens on Antique row at Gravel Gertie’s shop. Major rewrite.